Month: April 2016
Drama Working Record
O What A Lovely War is a musically-themed play that refers to the scenes and figures of World War One. It displays the ups and downs of the war and how certain characters dealt with the conflict that went on from 1914 to 1918. The play uses a satire method, which exaggerates the shaming and abuse of individuals, mainly because of the status and power that is presented between the characters.
Satire is a genre of literature, and sometimes graphic and performing arts, in which vices, follies, abuses, and shortcomings are held up to ridicule, ideally with the intent of shaming individuals, corporations, government or society itself, into improvement.
There is much controversy in today’s world, with many people thinking that there is a massive presence of political satire. For example, many people believe that western countries such as the United States of America and the United Kingdom are highly active in gaining profits from wars that go on today. But then again, this cannot be confirmed as the satire seen today is not as clear as that of the First World War.
Because of the setting of the play, it is crucial to mention how government’s use of propaganda affected people in war
The story of the play clearly surrounds events during the First World War, giving an insight on the mainly the profits made by manufacturers and bankers. This led to many of the rich wanting the war to be prolonged and not ended as soon as possible, which would help many of them gain even more and more money, as more and more poor people died during the war. Part of the plot also targeted the likes of General Haig, who was associated with the Battle of the Somme, which held 400,000 deaths of British or Commonwealth soldiers. The catastrophe was seen to be in the hand of Haig, who had orchestrated the tactics and formations used. Haig was Britain’s commander-in-chief, meaning he held a massive account for this.
Themes found in Oh What A Lovely War:
Corruption – During the conversation between the Scottish Ghillie and the grouse-shooting party of British, French, German and American munitions manufacturers with the Swiss banker, there was definitely a presence of corruption and money being the centre of attention. This being part of the first few scenes, it would go on to show the contrast between the rich people (who weren’t directly involved in the war) and the poor (who were the ones that would be in war, endangering lives of themselves and several others.
Arms Sales in the First World War – Just like the previous theme, this was also involved in the conversation between the powers. They had wanted the World War to carry on, as it provided them with the power to gain money from the distribution of weaponry and gas. The picture below is a representation of the masses of dangerous equipment that was prepared by workers. These production units kept weapons that made the rich gain profits of millions and millions of currency.
Rifles were by far the most produced pieces of weaponry during the First World War, along with machine guns, which had a massive impact on the destruction of sites and other areas. German soldiers would usually carry 7.92 Mauser rifles, whilst the English were exposed to the use of Lee-Enfield rifles.
Stimulus:
The stimulus is one the most important pieces of information leading up to our performance. We decided to take the situation of General Haig in the Battle of the Somme and base our work around this, hence the reference made by the Private (Eugene) in his spoken word. The loss of men was a figure that stood out and we felt as though it would give out the strongest message to the audience. Sites such as BBC and the History Learning Site were used, as they provided a lot of information on how so many men were lost because of General Haig. The booklet containing the extracts from O What A Lovely War was incredibly useful, as it gave some scenarios where Haig was mentioned, and they did in fact have an impact on how we acted ourselves.
Also, we used the fact that there were rich war profiteers to make the soldiers (the poor) quite scared and emotional, seeing as they didn’t live the good life.
Planning & Development:
Characters –
Josh Ali – Herbert Smith Sr and Jr
Eugene Panton – Private
Amjad King – Sargent
Our initial planning began with us devising our own improvised scenes in small groups, which would then expand into what we have now. We gained helped from our teacher Mr Waugh mainly on our methods of acting. We were taught how to perform spoken words, Stanislavsky’s methods, different statuses and a few more that definitely had an impact on how our performance turned out.
Costume – The fact that (Herbert Smith Jr) Josh wore a different type of colour, highlighted the difference between him and the other characters, which was essential in creating a negative distance between his and my character. We also wanted to keep the military look, but it was modernised with the type of wear we had. Here is an example of what we wore during our dress rehearsal:

The costume is quite straightforward, as there was only one type of clothing we could use.
Lighting:
For the lighting, we decided to keep a constant scheme. For spoken word, we would use a faint blue or red light. Judging on the tone of the speaking, we would change the colours. Blue would be for more sentimental tones and red would be classed as anger, which is how both colours are normally perceived in real life. For the usual acting, we would always use the white light, which made it easy to signify that the acting was set in present day First World War. For our flashbacks, we also used the red light, which could also symbolise death, because the father of Herbert Smith Jr had died, in the arms of me (Sargent).
The lighting cue was incredibly important in making sure that our performance would go as planned. Our decisions on the lighting were though about thoroughly, to show the difference between flashbacks, spoken word and present day scenes. For the flashback when Smith Sr (Josh) died in war, we decided to use the red light, as it indicated danger and death, two themes the colour red is normally associated with. For the spoken words and reading of the letter, we decided to use a the blue for all of them, as they presented a melancholy and depressing theme, which is what we aim to provide for the audience.
These lighting techniques played a great role in changing the mood of the play as a whole and how the audience perceived each three characters. The lighting cue is written below:
Start of performance
Begin with darkness
When all props are set, put up the red light only
When Josh finishes talking on the ground, dim the light down to pitch black
Dim up to white light when Josh and Eugene are sitting down beside the blocks
When Josh begins reading the letter, dim up to blue light only
When Josh finishes the letter, put up the white light only
Wait for everyone to leave the stage and dim down to black
Put up to blue when Amjad is centre stage.
Dim down blue when Amjad leaves the stage
When Eugene and Josh are on the floor, bring up the white light.
When Eugene begins his spoken word dim the light to red only
When he’s finished his spoken word, dim the light to pitch black
End of performance
Props and Objects –
The prop that our scenes were based around was the letter that was written by Herbert Smith Jr (Josh). I had written this so that it would cause Josh to look quite weak in front of the audience, which was a success. The letter also included Smith’s desire for his dad to be there with him, telling him to keep on going. The letter was also made so that it looked like quite rubbish, brown paper, adding an effect to the conditions of the war and the environments around Herbert Smith Jr.
We had also decided to take out the appearance of a fake gun, as it made the scenes less realistic as I gave it to Lieutenant Rodgers. This was beneficial as it made the performance less comical, seeing as the prop had an orange tip to it. Making this change also provided us with a chance to focus more on how carefully we acted out this scene, because this part in particular showed how much the Sargent disliked Smith Jr.
Presenting time with lighting –
Creating a difference between time and scene was incredibly hard to perform smoothly. The lighting came out as an essential factor in doing so. For all the scenes, we would dim all the lights right down only for a few second, so that we were able to get the stage ready and for the audience to understand that a new scene was about to come up. I think the flashback was hard to signify, but the red light definitely showed some sort of ‘past’ or difference to the present day scenes.
Reflection and Evaluation –
During our performance, I felt that we were strong in showing many of our feelings, which was also affected a lot by how the lighting changed throughout. The scenes flowed incredibly well in my opinion. There weren’t many stutters or faults. We made a beneficial move to leave out a scene of the death of Herbert, which would cause suspense upon the members of the audience. Even though this was the case, it was still incredibly likely that people knew he would die anyway, because it was previously stated that General Haig’s tactics caused a total of 400,000 men to die during the Battle of the Somme, which was a massive number, considering how long the battle was.
There were a few negative aspects to the performance which I believe we could have improved significantly though. I feel that even though we picked the correct lights to use for our performance, we should have made our light cue sheet even more presentable, so that the person responsible for the lighting would have better timing. Because of this, I decided to rewrite the lighting cue sheet, so that it’ll be much more straightforward for us and the person responsible for the lighting, which’ll benefit our performance very much.
The dress rehearsal audience’s response was quite positive. They tended to be incredibly focused mostly on the spoken word moments, suggesting they were interested in a bit of our character’s own stories and how we felt as individual characters.
Compare how extreme emotions are portrayed in the protagonists of Macbeth and A Christmas Carol
Compare how extreme emotions are portrayed in the protagonists of Macbeth and A Christmas Carol.
Both stories ‘A Christmas Carol’ by Charles Dickens and ‘Macbeth’ by William Shakespeare share a set of extreme emotions that play a big part in how both plots progress. Throughout this essay, I will highlight these emotions and thoroughly explain how and why they were used by both authors.
In the play Macbeth, the first extreme emotion would have definitely been sheer shock, felt by the protagonist, who was of course Macbeth, the thane of Glamis at the time. The specific time of this moment was Act 1 Scene 3 where the witches told him about being the future king of Scotland. This early event led to Macbeth being incredibly inquisitive about their prophecy towards the end of their dialogue where the disappearance of the three witches was seen. Evidence of this judgement is a quote that states: ” Stay you imperfect speakers, tell me more: I know I am thane of Glamis; but how of Cawdor?”. This quote shows the shocked and inquisitive side to Macbeth, telling us that he didn’t expect this unlikely prophecy to be told to him. At the time, Macbeth was the highly respected thane of Glamis, but this prophecy that the witches released his way was a massive shock to him, along with the fact that he was in the presence of the supernatural. At the time of the writing of the play, the subject of the supernatural was quite normal to talk about. Witches weren’t ‘entities’ or ghostly-like, they were thought to be in the bodies of real human beings. Shakespeare definitely included this scene, because at the time it would have been an even more realistic way to reveal how Macbeth’s future could be shaped. Shakespeare also included this scene in the play, as it was important to see how easily Macbeth could be persuaded to do things he could never think of doing, which was of course trying to become King by doing the deed of killing King Duncan, who was in fact his cousin in the story.
The beginning of A Christmas Carol was quite different to the beginning of Macbeth. This was mainly because Scrooge (the protagonist) showed spiteful emotions towards everyone he encountered. Spite is the word I would use to describe the extreme emotions shown in this part of the story. A quote that supports this is ‘“I wish to be left alone,” said Scrooge … “If they would rather die,” said Scrooge, “they had better do it, and decrease the surplus population.”’. This quote did have an effect on the reader as it caused Scrooge to be perceived as an incredibly heartless and rude person, which was what Charles Dickens aimed to do for the beginning part of the story. The quote also showed the lack of socializing that came with Ebenezer Scrooge. The main reason why Charles Dickens had implemented this into the book was to show the massive change in behaviour Scrooge would later take on, which is the plot of the story. Once again, it was different to the beginning of Macbeth, as the feelings were not similar, and in Macbeth, he would socialise with the people that talked to him in the scene e.g. Banquo and the Three Witches.
The second extreme emotion was definitely confusion which was incredibly blatant and saw him go through a change of mind-set. He seemed to be incredibly controlled and surprised by the deed he was about to do, which was committing the killing of King Duncan to become the next King. This part of the play was the penultimate part to Macbeth actually completely changing from the brave and mighty man that he was before. I found a quote that suggested this; “A dagger of the mind, a false creation, proceeding from the heat oppressed brain?”. This quote is incredibly strong in presenting the mind set of Macbeth. It clearly shows he was experiencing traumatising moments because of what he was about to do. I know this because he had been hallucinating, picture the scenes of a dagger, which of course wasn’t real. Shakespeare had written this to show the quick effects on Macbeth, and how he was slowly turning into a man that not many people would look up to like they used to at the beginning of the story. The fact that Macbeth said ‘heat-oppressed brain’ meant that he knew what he was doing was putting pressure on him, which caused him to panic and hallucinate.
The second part of A Christmas Carol was incredibly similar to this. The extreme emotion found in this part of the story was definitely also confusion, mainly because he didn’t understand how he was seeing the supernatural, just like Macbeth did when he saw the three witches. Both supernatural beings in each story were there to pass on a message to the protagonists. The fact that Scrooge was seeing a ghost took over the whole of his body and made him feel a completely different way, bringing out the extreme emotion found which was confusion. The quote to highlight this part of the story was ‘Scrooge was very much dismayed to hear the spectre going on at this rate, and began to quake exceedingly.’ The fact that Scrooge was dismayed meant he was distressed and concerned about the happenings of this chapter. This also affected the way we thought about Scrooge now. The reader didn’t really know if he had other feelings, and seeing him in this state was quite different, compared to how Charles Dickens portrayed him in the first stages. The author, Charles Dickens, included this in the story as it would show a different side to Ebenezer Scrooge, who (like said before) was a spiteful character and had no interest in talking to others. This was also done so that we could see how much he would change, once he was put in an uncomfortable position, like what he did to many people. In comparison to Macbeth, they were both in quite similar moods at this stage, because of the supernatural beings they had experienced.
The third extreme emotion felt by Macbeth was sheer guilt. He understood how much trouble his mind got him into. He said “O, full of scorpions is my mind, my dear wife”. In this line he is talking to Lady Macbeth, expressing his feelings and how he understands his mind doesn’t contain good thoughts. The fact that he said his mind was full of scorpions meant his thoughts were poison. This is backed up by the killing of King Duncan. Shakespeare was smart to do this, because it was also a massive change in character and showed the consequences of selfishness and greed. The fact that he had listened to the witches led him to this guilt he was feeling at the time. The metaphoric language used in this quote was a great language technique to show how guilty Macbeth was.
Compared to this, Scrooge’s next extreme emotions were incredibly similar. He too was feeling guilty for the things he had done towards other people. But in this case, the difference was that the protagonist was able to change what he did, which would be seen later in the story. “I see, I see. The case of this unhappy man might be my own. My life tends that way, now. Merciful Heaven, what is this?”. This line without a shadow of a doubt gives off Ebenezer Scrooge’s feelings and lets us know that he is full of regret. This was done by Charles Dickens to change the perception of Scrooge, who would now be seen not as an incredibly spiteful man. This was because he had begun to felt guilty, letting people know that he did have a weakness and the supernatural sightings had brought this out of him. Once again, this was incredibly similar to the feelings of Macbeth, as they both felt rather guilty for what they had done, and because of the circumstances that went on, they understand how and why they did wrong.
The last part of Macbeth saw the protagonist going through an incredibly unstable mental state. The extreme emotion was clearly insanity. This was all because of what he had done to his companions. The guilt had clearly taken over him which led to the incredibly metaphoric language used. “Life’s but a walking shadow, a poor player, that struts and frets his hour upon the stage”. In this short extract, Macbeth talks about life as if it is a pointless thing. He uses incredibly metaphoric language, which indicates he doesn’t know how to put his situation into simple words. This is one of the most important parts of the play itself as it shows just how badly one decision can be. Shake definitely put in this part of the story so that we could see the overall change in behaviour of Macbeth, which clearly went from positive to negative over a short amount of time.
Lastly, in comparison to the last paragraph, we notice that the extreme emotion found in the last part of A Christmas Carol was clearly happiness. Scrooge had changed his ways; he was almost another man. The fact that he actually went out of his way to wish Bob a Merry Christmas meant that his attitude and emotions were different. “A merrier Christmas, Bob, my good fellow, than I have given you for many a year. I’ll raise your salary, and endeavour to assist your struggling family.”. This quote is an excellent representation of how the appearance of the supernatural changed the mind-set of Ebenezer Scrooge. He had also offered to raise Bob’s wages; another piece of evidence that suggested he was a much happier man. Shakespeare had done this to highlight the ways in which Scrooge had changed as a result. These emotions were definitely unlike the ones that were found at the end of Macbeth. In fact, they were the complete opposite.



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